After the breakup, I joined the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection

Chapter 116 What You Wrote Is Bullshit

In fact, what Yang Jinbao said was quite ignorant. After all, the leader had just decided to use Lu An's manuscript, and you were still so eager to recommend yourself. Isn't this a slap in the face of the leader?

Zhao Yuedong raised his head and looked at him deeply. "I heard that you volunteered to ask Director Qin to write the manuscript? It seems that you are very confident in your article, right?"

Zhao Yuedong is worthy of being the office director. He took the initiative to mention Qin Hailong here, saying that he was giving this face to Qin Hailong. If Yang Jinbao lost face, it would also be Qin Hailong's fault.

Yang Jinbao didn't seem to understand these twists and turns. He puffed out his chest and answered proudly: "I used to be the vice president of the Student Union of Huaqing University. The manuscripts I wrote were taken by the president to report to the central government. I have also won many writing awards in the school. I am very confident in my writing ability. This is my strong point."

"Really? Then I'd like to take a closer look."

Zhao Yuedong took the manuscript submitted by Yang Jinbao with surprise, but he frowned as soon as he opened it.

"Your writing style is wrong."

Zhao Yuedong looked up: "Did you take the wrong materials? I suggest you go back and look for them."

Yang Jinbao held his head high and said, "Yes, this is it. I spent two hours writing it yesterday, and I spent another hour revising it in the dormitory at night. I can't be wrong!"

Lu An shook his head and sighed: Brother, can't you tell that Director Zhao is trying to give you a way out?

"If you didn't take the wrong thing, then I can only say that you are a piece of shit. What is it that you wrote?"

Zhao Yuedong suddenly burst out: "Think carefully about what we are writing. It's a report to the leaders of the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection, but look at what you have written? The weather is fine, do you think you are writing a diary? And what about these parallel rhetorical questions? Is it prose?"

"You have been in the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection for more than half a year. Have you not read any of the documents in the office? Have you not learned how to write documents? Don't you know the writing style of the agency?"

Yang Jinbao was obviously not convinced: "I just think the writing style of those articles is too boring, so I write like this to make the articles more vivid and literary!"

Yang Jinbao added at the end: "I used to write like this when I was at Huaqing University! Our president took it to report to the central government..."

"Bullshit your grandma!"

Zhao Yuedong couldn't help but swear, "Yang Jinbao, who do you think you are? Let me tell you, the former Jianghuai top scorer in the college entrance examination, the talented scholar from Huaqing Literature Department, is now in our Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection. Do you want me to show you his essays and see how they were written? Or do you, Yang Jinbao, think you are better than the talented scholar from Literature Department?"

"You are so arrogant and incompetent, and you are talking nonsense. How can you take your article to the central government? Do you believe that if your principal really takes this piece of shit you wrote to the central government, he will beat you with a belt when he comes back the same day."

"What do you think this place is? What do you think the official document is? A gallery for you to show off your literary talent?"

"Besides, even if you want to show off, you should do it better. Look at the rubbish you wrote. You wanted to show your face, but ended up showing your ass!"

Zhao Yuedong grabbed the documents on the table and smashed them hard on Yang Jinbao, finally roaring angrily: "Get out of here with this pile of waste paper!"

Zhao Yuedong was really furious and didn't give Yang Jinbao any face. However, he didn't expect that Yang Jinbao would dare to recommend himself after writing such a bunch of crap and hand it to him.

It is no exaggeration to say that among so many people in this office, any one of them can write better than him.

It's just dirtying your eyes and wasting your time.

However, this was also because of Lu An's example, who had submitted such an excellent article. In addition, Yang Jinbao himself always boasted about having written articles for school leaders. Zhao Yuedong thought that his work would not be too bad, and maybe he would meet two good writers this year.

But it turns out that Yang Jinbao is such a person.

Thinking of this, Zhao Yuedong raised his head and said, "Lu An, remember, when you write materials in government agencies, you must keep your writing simple and capable. You must not write those flashy and flowery articles. This does not mean that you cannot show your literary talent at all, but you must find ways to polish your articles while maintaining a simple writing style."

“This kind of polishing cannot simply be a pile of flowery words, but must be natural and make people feel that this kind of description should be used here.”

Lu An nodded seriously, saying that he would work hard to learn the agency's material writing skills and strive to become a qualified material cadre as soon as possible.

Zhao Yuedong was very satisfied, not only with Lu An's humble attitude, but also with his article.

"You are more talented and smarter than him. More importantly, you are willing to learn with all your heart, which is great."

Zhao Yuedong hesitated for a moment and said, "Lu An, you must not underestimate material writing. Although it is indeed boring, it is the fastest and most effective opportunity to gain the appreciation of the leader."

"First of all, materials mean the right to interpret and speak on a matter. I believe you have already experienced this. If Yang Jinbao can really write good materials, and if you give him the case report, then the result will most likely be that your contribution will be wiped out."

Lu An said he understood, this was why Qin Hailong could so easily arrange for Yang Jinbao to write the materials, just to cause trouble for him.

“In addition, the signature of the material is also very important!”

Zhao Yuedong continued, "Just look at our three departments. There are more than 30 people. The director simply doesn't have time to get to know everyone. He can only learn from your reporting materials. If your materials are well written and recommended, then your name will appear in front of the deputy secretary or even the secretary."

"As long as your name appears in front of the leaders frequently, then when there is an opportunity to promote cadres, your chances will be very great!"

It must be said that Zhao Yuedong was truly frank, because with regard to such experiences in an institution, there would be few leaders willing to share them with others.

Now Zhao Yuedong was willing to tell him all this, no matter it was because of Ye Xianggao or Qin Hailong, he treated him as one of his own.

Lu An bowed deeply to Zhao Yuedong, saying that he had taken note of it and would be humble and work hard in the future.

"Okay, then go and revise the manuscript first. Just like you said, you must be modest and calm, and revise it seriously. I believe you have a good chance of reporting your manuscript to the secretary."

Zhao Yuedong said and asked Lu An to go out.

Then Zhao Yuedong picked up the phone on the desk and dialed: "Director Ye, this is Zhao Yuedong. We in the Third Department have found a treasure! This Lu An is really an incredible talent!"